>too many women
I’m sorry, I don’t know what those words mean in that order.
>do you ever think, “there should be a guy in here somewhere?”
>I see no need for anymore men in the story at this time, but I’m afraid it won’t appeal to a large enough audience.
You’re trying to sell a thing you haven’t even written yet. Write the story you would write if you were just going to put it in a drawer.
Write the story you want to read.
"You’re trying to sell a thing you haven’t even written yet. Write the story you would write if you were just going to put it in a drawer.
"Write the story you want to read. "
I think that, at some point, all of us who write forget this, and I’m so grateful to Kelly Sue for reminding us.
The muscles in Kili’s jaw twitched. He should leave, the quicker and quieter the better. He shouldn’t trust himself to stand idly by for the gale that was about to strike. But something held him in place; something nosy, or something selfish, or the fear sewn in his stomach, so tightly that the seams puckered.
"You’re talking about how he got that scar." Clearly, Bilbo had meant to arrive here all along.
Fili nodded. “It started as a barfight…”
nooooo, you’re a great writer, even in the “SO TERRIBLE, GIVING US CLIFFHANGERS”—and for me, always cliffhangers~
ahahahahaa thank thank thank.
yes i am leaning toward the cliffhanger. but everything is kind of a cliffhanger at this point!!!!!!!!!!!
do i publish a shorter chapter with less action, or a longer chapter with a cliffhanger
the queen mab scherzo is on one of my upcoming auditions